Notes on revision

Characters

• Nawal - hears voices of dead children calling her guiding her to do ritual to raise the dead. Ritual involves a perversion of how God created people. Makes them out of blood and dirt.
  • Tariq - may also want to raise his wife
• Tower of Babel ruin hunt - people searching out artifacts
  • Many languages
  • Tie in Emma (artifacts government wants), Qamar, Veronica, Sabriyya, Angel (proof of what really happened at the tower of babel), Rodney, David Kinder, Munir
• Qamar - wants to explore tower, maybe lure interest away
• Sabriyya Nejem - Get artifacts to sell. More money means more troops.
• Angel Cruz - Embellished hints of truth on recognition cards. Should also mention that this character's perception of reality is not entirely accurate.
• Rodney - Trying to sell robots to people, it's a unit you can buy; add recognition packs
• Imad Ibn Junayd - go out and get US, UK or UN support, support anywhere that you can get support, look for more
• Emel - add knows all languages, add recognition pack for Nawal and many others

Military and economics

• Dynamic political capital structure - controlling cities and provinces
• Ability to raise troops through money
• Ability to spend money to "campaign"
• Oil generates money
• Proclamations using political power are only real if they have capital at end of game

Other

• Nawal needs more to do - summoning dead children, increased information in mem packs, bring memories out earlier, needs to have women that aren't her enemy - possibly trust strange western woman, needs more goals, crazy has erased social conventions - they don't mean anything anymore
• Derangements that interact more interestingly
• Map - handout was hard to read, especially color matching, make reference on board easier, Possible custom pieces?, Make magnetic pieces and metal backed map?
• Increase complexity of economy based on ownership of places
• More and better organized news stories
• People will come check their folder, we can give Shoggoth packets when ritual happens
• For MIT everyone will have guns -- no, not true anymore, as we want to discourage killing.
• Check for plot light, check for anything explicitly false, add discussed plot