TLS Book Planning

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TODO

  • Table of contents
  • Introduction
  • Hagaddah:
    • Put the order back into the seder - Nat
    • Add a script for Chris at the beginning of her hagaddah - Susan
    • Bullets on Rabban Gamliel stuff look weird; find some other way to typeset it - Nat
  • "How to Read This Book" section - explaining the structure of the LARP and how it relates to the book
  • Epilogues for all the scenarios - I drafted some, but we'll want to have them for all the scenarios
    • Slavery in Egypt - kill "but to no avail," it doesn't make sense in context
    • Consistentize tenses
  • Book epilogue - explain what happens at the end of the game
  • Appendix - summary of references
  • Re-order the book - basically, shuffle the character sheets into narratively appropriate places. Probably needs some group discussion
  • Editing, editing, editing!
    • Philip - remove asides, make them more in character - never qualify belief - say things like "God knows" instead - Nat
    • Philip - lying in a ditch, add "alternately praying to and berating God" - Nat
    • Frank - split heading into separate lines - Nat
    • Jamie - maria_angst++ - Susan
    • Simone - clarify backstory more - Nat
    • Judah - (angst++)++, clarify what policies he actually wants - John
  • Scenarios - graphic design
    • Try to use drawings (NOT photos) instead of gray boxes - Nat
    • Different fonts - Nat

Order of the book

  • Jamie Schreiber - Group 2
  • Slavery in Egypt - a town is barricaded up in a church, trapped in by the oncoming floods, and are trying to figure out what to do - Josh
  • James Popadopoulos - Group 1
  • The 4 sons - set in the FAR future on the new planet: why did we come here? - Nat
  • Andrea - Group 2
  • Pearl Skala - Group 4
  • Chris is Baptized/Burning Bush - Susan
  • Barry Magdalene - Group 2
  • First of the ten plagues - four "Congress" scenes: 3 plagues, 3 plagues, 3 plagues, and firstborn/denouncement of sinners - John
  • Philip - Group 3
  • Col. Frank Bartholomew - Group 3
  • Jesus's Cures - people come to Jesus looking for a miracle cure - she is frustrated because people won't listen to her teachings - Susan
  • John Popadopoulos- Group 1
  • Jude Fairchild - Group 1
  • Second plague
  • Simone Cylima- Group 4
  • Parting of the Red Sea - ship is ready for takeoff; is mobbed by people who want to get on. Police, and Andrew, have surrounded it trying to control the crowd. Nakshum (the first man into the Red Sea) steps forward, saying "I'd rather die by your guns than lose my place on this ship." He is the last man to get on. Ship takes off, killing everyone else with its flames. - Josh
  • Tamasa Valappil - Group 2
  • Third Plague
  • Eve Matthews - Group 4
  • Loaves and Fishes/Manna From Heaven - the first test of the replicator on the SHIFRA ship. A scientist says "let's just test this damn thing already" and sticks in his lunch - a tuna sandwich. - Nat
  • Chris Carpenter - Group 2
  • Last Plague
  • The Meal - conversation
  • Judah Isaacson- Group 3
  • The Welcoming of Elijah - oh CRAP. Men with guns are at the door to take Chris!
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